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My Manga: Rei Kugi

Journal Entry: Fri Jun 13, 2008, 7:58 PM
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I've acutally sat down for hours and thought about the plot and Ifinally came up with one.[this is all still in idea form] Ok title info. "Rei" is the name of the main charactrer. "Kugi" is NOT her last name though it looks like it. "Kugi" is Japanese for "nail" and not the kinda of nail that you hammer into wood, FINGER nail. This is suposedly my title SO FAR. [I might change it]

Rei Kugi Introdution:
Rei is on her way home from school, then someone comes running up from behind her yelling "Rei!" She turns around to see her cousin, Riku (girl). Riku tells her to follow her to her Martial Arts class. She follows and when she gets there,the instructor approches her as if she knew her, her whole life.
She says "Rei, its so nice to finally meet you!"
Rei reply's "Thank you, and you are...?"
"Mrs. Oharu" Riku answers.
"Yes, I wanted to meet you to tell you something very important." Mrs.Oharu says. "Please, come with me."
Rei follows her into a room in the back of the building. "Please, sit" she says. "Why am I here? What do you want?" Rei asks. "Something very important has come to mind. Have you been experiencing anything strange lately?." Mrs.Oharu asks. "Well now that I think about it...In fact! This morning I woke up with all the finger nails on my right hand a different color..." Rei answers. Mrs.Oharu then grabs her right hand and stdies it closly. "I see...it's time" Mrs.Oharu replys. "Try to stay calm when I say this, but when you woke up this morning, this those different color nails of yours...That was the first sign..sybolizing that your ready to harness the power of 'Kugi'" Mrs.Oharu says. "Kugi?" Rei asks. "Kugi is a term used to describe a special power held by the hosts' nails. uhh.. Can I ask, what colors they were?" Mrs.Oharu says. "uhh...The thumb was black, the pointer was red, middle was lime green, the ring finger was blue, and the pinky was white." Rei answers. "Do you know why they were different colors?" Mrs.Oharu asks. "Of course not! I'm only just finding out about this."Rei says. "Each color symbolizes a different power, that is the true power of Kugi"
"Since each nail has a different power each should have the same activation method, right? So to activate each power, you must hold that particular finger up to your mouth and blow softly. You can only blow once on a finger for one use. And you can use it over and over again. So if you need to use it multiple times, then you need to blow on that finger multiple times." Mrs.Oharu explains.
"Ok. I get it so far, but..what power is each nail?" Rei asks.
"Your pinkey nail, white, holds the power of life and light. Of course to activate the power just blow on your finger, and to use the power you must consentrate hard on your desire to win. But getting used to all the powers is pretty easy and quick.
Your ring finger, blue, has the power of water and air
Your middle finger, lime green, contains the power of just a simple laser, but a strong laser, able to cut through bone itself
Your pointer finger, red, has the power of fire and burn. Once activated this power must be used by touch. Touch anything and it will burst to flames with this one.
Your thumb, black, holds the power of death and darkness. This power can only be used once in your lifetime, you must be sure that whatever you want to use it on, is something you want dead for the rest of eternity. After that one use then you can never use it again. This power is used by touch, and is the most darkest of powers the world has to offer." Mrs.Oharu explains. Rei looks down at her right-hand thumb, gtting a nervous look on her face.
"What if i accidentally use it, ...without meanng to?" Rei asks.
"Oh don't worry about that because the power is so beyond human limits, it takes full, devoted consentration to be able to use it." Mrs Oharu reasures her.

This is all that i have so far for this, please comment your ideas and wether i should put in, or take out anything.
Thank you, clpidn57751
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sounds cool!
the only things I see wrong are that Rei seems to accept going to Mrs. Oharu and what Mrs. Oharu tells her without questioning it. It would also be nice to have an explanation of why she has the power and how Mrs. Oharu knows about it.

Other than that, it sounds very interesting.

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Interesting! I never thought fingernails would take place as a critical element in manga!
It would be nice though, if we know why Mrs. Oharu knows that Rei has this power and not just different colored fingernails.

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Cool!!=D That's an interesting story...:heart:

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thnx and ya i thought some people might wanna know that...i'll add it in soon

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